The disappearing world! Writing for week 8!

Hello everyone and welcome back to my blog. This week for writing we had to create a narrative. We had to use Pobble 365 to get the inspiration. Then we had to write the story. This is my story. 

The Disappearing World

The cries and screaming of people disappearing into the void was all Ollie heard as he ran in the opposite direction. Ollie was a kid who had brought doom onto our planet. Of course this story isn’t real because this story is set back in 1847 and we are still here. Anyway, Ollie had brought doom to Earth. He ran in the opposite direction hoping that he could find somewhere to hide or escape. 

But we don’t yet know what happened. It was back on the 5th of June 1841, Ollie’s fifth birthday, as he was in 1847, 11 years old. For his fifth birthday he got himself a horse. It was helpful because his best friend, from Kindergarten, Alex lived on the other side of the town right next to school. You may be thinking there are things called cars you realise, but this is in 1847 and we didn’t have cars back then. Anyway Ollie loved his horse very much until it died. It was shot dead when Ollie and his father Charles went on a hunting trip and the horse got scared and got in the way of a bullet. But this isn’t why were here. Ollie went to go for a walk and found a spaceship crashed in the bushes. Ollie dove into a bush and peered through the leaves and saw humanoid creatures trying to rebuild their crashed spaceship. The humanoids climbed aboard the ship and started to lift off. Since Ollie didn’t know what to do he just picked up a stone and threw it at the ship. It hit something and the ship collapsed into a mountain with a gigantic explosion. Charles yelled out to Ollie from the other side of the forest and Ollie ran through the forest into Charles’ arms. 

That is not the full story though. A year later Ollie had found a cave in the crater of were the UFO had crashed in the mountain. Ollie and Alex walked into the cave to find a long, winding staircase. The two walked down the stairs and saw a ball of yellow light in the centre of the Earth. Can you guess what it is called? The centre of the Earth. Anyway, they saw the orb and then Alex threw a stick at it. A shockwave threw Ollie and Alex back against the wall and knocked them out completely. 

Three weeks later. 

Ollie woke up in the towns hospital wing to see Alex in the bed next to him. Alex had a massive bruise on his head and a cast around his arm. Ollie had a cast around his arm and his leg. He also had a bandage around his head. Alex had a tray with a loaf of bread and a glass of milk. Ollie was laktosintolerant so he couldn’t drink milk or have bread. A nurse walked into the room and spook to Alex about something. Although the bandage around Ollie’s head stopped him from hearing what they were saying. 

“Hello Master Oliver Barker, you are finally awake,” the nurse spook very calmly to Ollie as his head was very sore and she knew he would be in pain. Suddenly Charles stormed through the door screaming and yelling. 

“You silly boys! What were you thinking?! Walking to the centre of the Earth! That is insane!” Charles’ face was as red as a tomato. He was so enraged you could literally see steam coming out of his ears and nose. 

“We are very sorry, father,” Ollie held his head low as his father kept screaming and yelling. 

“You should be!” Charles screamed in Ollie’s face. 

“Excuse me Mr Barker, I am very sorry but you are going to have to leave,” the nurse exclaimed. Charles was so enraged he started to trash half the room. Luckily there were police in the building and they came in and arrested him. 

Well that is all we know. First aliens blowing up and throwing a stick at the centre of Earth. But none of these things that we mentioned is what caused the world to start disappearing. It was a natural thing that normally occurred in space, not in the Andromeda galaxy. Yes this is not a normal Earth. This is 1847 years after the collision of the Milky Way and Andromeda. Anyway the thing that occurred was none other than a worm hole. It was invisible to the naked eye but Ollie could see it clearly. Everyone else saw it as the void. He ran as fast as he could to the mountain that the alien spacecraft had landed. Ollie climbed up the mountain and saw the crater not that far away. Although neither was the worm hole. As he was on the edge of the crater he looked behind and saw none other than the prison being sucked up by the worm hole. Someone that looked familiar was floating in the air. He squinted and saw Charles Barker being sucked into the worm hole. 

“Dad! No!” Ollie watched as his fathers life ended right in front of hisz eyes. He would never see his father again. Ollie’s eyes watered up as he dashed to the spacecraft. He got inside and saw to his delight, Alex working on the main control box. 

“Alex!” Ollie yelled dashing to his friend. 

“Hello Oliver,” Alex was working on the main control and then stood up, “Its finished. We can escape.” 

“Lets go then,” Ollie jumped with excitement that he would leave. The ship started up and Alex piloted the ship out of the crater. Suddenly the ship made a beeping sound and the engine failed. The ship fell out of the air and into the void. But not all was lost. 

Have you ever wrote a narrative like this before? Tell me in the comments below. Goodbye.