Pearl in the Ice
Have you ever used the fantastics in your writing before? Tell me in the comments. Goodbye.
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Pearl in the Ice
Fantastics | Sentences: |
Feeling | Marina felt the tug of a sad, lonely sort of sickness. |
Asking | Hand out, feel for the broken stump, swing to a sitting position and then slowly stand up to edge along the branch towards the trunk. |
Noticing | She looked up at the blue sky through the lace of green leaves; |
Touching | Hand out, feel for the broken stump, swing to a sitting position and then slowly stand up to edge along the branch towards the trunk. |
Action | Marina pushed her leg over the branch and then levered her body upwards, hidden once more amongst the leaves. |
Smelling | I pass through a kitchen where the smell of food – meaty, garlicky – makes my mouth water, though I mustn’t let it distract me. (This is from a different book. I couldn’t find anything for smelling in this book. The book is called, Sky Chasers.) |
Tasting | She rolled it up and put it in her mouth as if it were a cigar. |
Imagining | What would it be like, she thought, to be the pilot of that cloudship, sedately patrolling the skies over the rooftops of London? |
Checking | one of the new airships of the king’s fleet floated slowly above her, serene and silent as a cloud. |
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