Writing with the fantastics! Part 2! Writing in week 2!

Hello everyone and welcome back to my blog. This week for writing we were writing with the fantastics again. We had to write different parts from Hansel and Gretel. The parts we wrote this week were: The witch and growing fatter and tricking the witch. Here is what I did: 

Adjectives

Looks Like	Moves Like	Sounds Like
Wrinkly	Slow	Old
Dried out	Stumbly	Growly
Dusty	Limp	Ladylike
Ancient	Waddles	Caring
Frail	Tumbles	Harsh
Plump	Tippy Toes	Helpful

Adverbial phrases	1-The old lady wobbled towards us.  2-She stumbled towards us.  3-She slowly walked down the brick path.
Dialogue	1- 2- 3-
Complex Sentences	1- 2- 3-

Sentences: 

An old lady wobbled out of the house whilst carrying a basket of egg shaped chocolates. She carried a walking stick in one hand and the chocolate in the other. She slowly walked across the hard brick stone pathway and into the woods. 

“Let’s go in the house eh Gretal,” said Hansel. The two walked up the pathway, onto the front doorstep. 

“Hello there young children,” the old lady said from behind us. 

“Hello, how are you?” Gretal turned around to reply. 

She opened the door and stepped inside. Hansel and Gretal followed her in, looking at the entire house. 

“Is this made out of candy?” Hansel asked. 

“Yes it very well is. Do you want to try some?” 

“Yes please,” Gretal replied. Hansel and Gretal walked outside a started to eat the candy on the top of the house. 

Growing Fatter and Tricking the Witch

Ginormous gingerbread	Cheesy chips	Crunchy candy
Creamy custard	Aromatic apples	Melting marshmallows

Alliteration	1- 2- 3-
Repetition	1-Every second, every minute, every hour she fed him;  2- 3-
Comparatives and Superlatives	1-Biggest 2-Fattest 3-Fastest

Every second of every minute of every hour of every day she fed him and fed him and fed him. Hansel became fatter and fatter, bigger and bigger, wider and wider. Hansel had become the fattest, biggest and widest he could ever be. Gretel just waited and waited for an opportunity to free Hansel. She watched as he ate melting marshmallows and buttery biscuits and crunchy candy over and over again. Hansel enjoyed eating the creamy custard and ginormous gingerbread. Gretel watched him become the fattest he had ever been and her the skinniest she had ever been. Hansels cunning plan that he just thought of had came to life. Fooling the witch with the skinny bone and not his fat finger was deceiving enough to fool the witch good. 

Have you ever read or wrote about Hansel and Gretel? Tell me in the comments. Goodbye.